AIDA
PLAN ( Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action Plan)
In
solicited letters you need only to open with favorable information about the
prospective purchase, expressed in terms of reader’s interest. In unsolicited
messages, you work harder to gain and keep attention and interest, in order to
keep the letter being thrown into the trash can.
The
basic guide of the organization of your sales letter is AIDA formula:
attention, interest, desire, and action. Most sales letters are prepared
according to the AIDA plan; or some variation of it. Although the following
discussion focus separately on each part of the AIDA Plan, the parts need not
always to be sequence, not need all parts be in every letter.
Readers
may (when you letter arrives) be thinking about something else. They may not
want to consider another proposal. Also they may have been expecting another
message and thus find your letter disappointing. Therefore, your first sentence
will have to succeed in generating willingness to read.
So, the
receiver’s attention must be captured in the opening sentence. It is important
that the opening sentence should be brief and positive. Short paragraphs look
easy to read.Of
Course, there are many methods to attract the receiver’s attention. These
methods include famous quotation, rhetorical question, interjections,
anecdotes, metaphors, of the products. Cliché openings, exaggerations, and
falsehood should be avoided. Gimmicks may be used but should not give the
receiver the impression that an attempt is being made to mislead him or her.
For example, beginning a letter with “your investment of Rs. 1500 may grow to
Rs 27000 by the end of the year” will probably cause the receiver to read no
further because the message is unrealistic.
The
opening paragraph to sell an expensive mantel clock is as follows:
Your
time is precious, especially when it is kept by a clock as magnificent as this
“thing of beauty which is a joy forever.” Crafted of finest quality mahogany
and hand painted with traditional Chinese scenes, this masterpiece is worthy of
becoming a family heirloom, to be passed on to grandchildren, and theirs.
From a
long advertisement from a man’s store, accenting quality and traditional
timeless designs.
THE KIND
OF SPORTSWEAR WE SELL LOOKS BETTER THE OLDER IT LOOKS. IT IS NOT THAT A DUMD
WAY TO RUN A BUSINESS?
- Watch for these weaknesses in opening paragraphs of sales letters.
- 1. A too long first paragraph. Although opening paragraphs should be short in all business letters, overly long ones are particularly bad in sales letter, in which you must gain and hold attention.
- 2. Questions with obvious answer, such as “would you like to increase profit”?
- 3. A writer centered opening, such as “we are proud to announce the opening of our new store.
- 4. Slow opening such as “we have received your inquiry about our products, we are writing to give you’re the information your requested.
- 5. A reference to the cost of the purchase unless price is to be used as central selling point.
Arouse
interest.
The
receiver’s interest must be held after his or her attention is gained. The
topic of the firs paragraph is expanded while maintaining the interest of the
receiver. Interest will be maintained when the receiver sees benefits for
himself. Therefore, you must give specific objective details about the product
or service you are attempting to sell. You should tell your reader what your
product or service will do for them. You should highlight your product’s or
service’s unique feature. Examples are given below.
1.
The new super slim iPhone
once again redefines what a digital music player should be. It is lighter than
2 CDs, can hold up to 10000 songs, thousand of digital photos, and works as a
personal voice recorder. Now you can sync with iTunes for Mac and Windows at
blazing speeds, and take your entire music collection with you wherever you go.
Available for Mac and Window starting at Rs. 22000.
2.
The surma is unique for the
history of medicine. It is the essence of numerous herbs. It has been submerged
in roses. It is panacea for all eye diseases such as infection, swelling, sore
and vision impairment. It will make vision better. The gifted camera like an
eye is not available even for a million.
Creating
Your Reader’s Desire by Presenting Convicting Evidence.
Once you
have the reader’s attention and interest, you must now create a desire for the
product of service you are selling. For this purpose, you should offer the
proof of the benefits the reader can gain. Doing so will motivate the reader to
take the requested actions.
In
addition, you must give specific objective details about the product or service
you are attempting to sell. You should tell your reader what your product or
servie will do for them. You should study the product and then select those
features which make it superior to other of this kind. Stress features for
reader’s point of view.
In
general, use colorful verbs and adjectives that convey a dynamic image. Be
careful, however, not to overdo it, “ your factory flours will sparkle like
diamond” is hard into believe and may prevent your audience from believing the
rest of the message.
Talking
about Price
Price is
a complicated issue. You can prepare your readers for your product’s price by
subtle choice and arrangement of words. Such words as “luxurious” and
economical provide unmistakable clues about how your price compares with that
of competitors.
If price
is not a major selling, your could leave our price altogether or mention it in
an accompanying brochure. You could deemphasize price by putting the actual
figures in the middle of the paragraph close to the end of your sales letter,
well after you have presented the benefit and selling points.
There
are two other techniques for minimizing price. One it is break a quantity price
into units. Instead of saying a carton of cold drinks cost Rs. 500, you might
say some other product or activity. Your aim is to make the cost seem as small
and affordable as possible.
Supporting Your Claims
People
will not believe what have said in writing. You will have to prove your claims,
especially if your product is expensive.
In the
middle paragraph of the letter, give enough time and space to build conviction.
You will not convince with vague generalities such as saying that the product
is fine, beautiful, strong, or “absolutely the finest the world”
Give
reasons, details, and specifications to convince the reader that the product is
absolutely the finest in the world.
Do not
speak in generalities. If the product is sturdy, why and how? If it is roomy,
how big it is? If it is dependable, how do you know? If it is economical to
operate, how many miles to a gallon? How do you know that it gets that many
miles to a gallon? How do you know that the tests were reliable? For this
purpose, include testimonials from satisfied users and celebrities; cite
statistics from scientific studies of the product’s performance. Enclose
samples and broachers. Offer guarantees of exchange or return privileges to
indicate that you have faith in product and are willing to back it up. Here is
an example.
Guarantee: Candy is produced under the strictest quality control and
should reach you in perfect condition. If you are not entirely satisfied with
this product, please return it within 30 days. Your statutory rights are not
affected.
Be sure
that the reader understands exactly what a response action is and how
accomplished. Make this action easy and risk free. Do not ask for a letter in
return. Only a pencil check on a postage paid card or perhaps a signature. If
you want the reader to telephone, give the telephone number. If you want the
reader to come into store, give the location of store and hours it is open. So
if possible give your reader a couple of options for responding, such as a tall
free number and website to visit.
Induce
Reader Action
You must
persuade the reader to take immediate action once you have built his or her
interest and desire. Specify the action preferably in terms of reader interest,
make action easy.
Try to
motivate the reader to take prompt action. If there is no particular reason to
act quickly, many sales letters offer discounts for orders placed by a certain
date or prizes. Other suggest that purchases be changed to a credit card or be
paid off in future. Still other offers a free trail, an unconditional
guarantee, all in an effort to overcome the reader’s natural inertia.
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